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'Constructive' Criticism
by Cory Parks
Sometimes all you need is, 'more' back-breaking labor!
Comments
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Rajarshi Pal
Good
Daniel Heitzman
I wish this was finished so I could judge it better. I really like what is here. You're poses are really nice. You also put a lot of thought into the characters and their relationship. Your timing isn't to bad either. You need to work on your physics, weight, and polish. Also, work a little bit more on your draftsmanship. Draw more, and frequently, cause I think you have a lot of potential.
Ramsey Pierson
I like your poses and acting for your characters. Shots could use improvement, but definitely an interesting scene!
Brian W.
This has a lot going for it. I'd love to see something you can spend more time on.