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The peasant
by lestin paul
November competition.
Comments
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Mohit
Overall very nice flow, only problem where he is saying "look at this filth" it is looking too stiff.
Nathaniel Winckler
Great job!! Your animation is very fluid, your body mechanics are pretty spot on, and I like your acting. I wish there was more context as to what "filth" is...I'm not sure what he points out. I think the first shot is unnecessary (or you need to add more to the scene so we understand the context better). The forefinger at the very end is too limp for the intensity of the scene. Make it pretty stiff, and I think you'll be good.
Satya
Nice....Some of the poses, I felt could be pushed further to really create the effect
Brian W.
Good acting.
Pallav Sharma
wow nice poses