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Short life

by Ali abdelnasser

Final Rating: 5.43. Finished #29 out of 130 entries.

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Animator

Ali abdelnasser

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2 weaks

Description

Ray Rig from CGtarian school

Comments

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Stephen Quenet

Movements could be more pronounced

Yuri Marcel Vieira

Lip sync is a bit off

Keaton Towns

Great job on the subtle body movements, but the facial expressions and lip syncing could use some polish.

Oliver Hollis

Nice movements.

slooper

I saw this twice?

Andrw Yair Guio

It's good, but it need to be more fluency

Michael McKnight

Audio is out of time with the animation itself.

George Jackson

The animation is good its just that the mouth movements don't sync up with the audio - George Jackson

Damian

I really like the fluidity in the body movements, it feels and moves so naturally and body language fits with the mood of the message. My only complaint is the lip sync doesn't feel and fluid and natural as the body movements but regardless I think this was well done.