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Newsroom
Description
Entry for the November Competition.
Comments
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Stephen Quenet
Could be a lot more expressive and the lips don't always match
Catherine
It's a bit stiff. Might want to think about adding some holds, slow ins and slow outs. Break up the hand movements and add some finger movements. Add some more facial expressions. Keep going!
Fred
Almost there. He needs more motion between his main gestures. He stops dead quite often and feels quite stiff. The constraint on the paper doesn't seem to be working and that was distracting.
Colleen Moore
The paper seems to moves on it's own. This looks a little weird.





