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Newsroom

by Rachel Stuart

Final Rating: 3.53. Finished #98 out of 130 entries.

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Animator

Rachel Stuart

Experience

Student in my Second Year

Time Taken

Around 2 days

Description

Entry for the November Competition.

Comments

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Stephen Quenet

Could be a lot more expressive and the lips don't always match

Catherine

It's a bit stiff. Might want to think about adding some holds, slow ins and slow outs. Break up the hand movements and add some finger movements. Add some more facial expressions. Keep going!

Fred

Almost there. He needs more motion between his main gestures. He stops dead quite often and feels quite stiff. The constraint on the paper doesn't seem to be working and that was distracting.

Colleen Moore

The paper seems to moves on it's own. This looks a little weird.