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Twin Thieves
Description
Two thieves just left by van the museum they robbed with the police chasing after them.
Comments
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Marnie Shick
Character motivation needs work
Deidre Messner Lash
I absolutely love the emotion you brought out in the characters! Your story was easy to pick up on and the shot setups felt just right for what was being shown. There was one moment when it almost felt like Driver Mery finished talking before the audio had so perhaps a little more movement when she finishes saying "harder". But that was minor really, I quite enjoyed this!
Sketch MacQuinor
Clever!