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The raiders of the lost frog
This is an animation I made for the challenge for an animation class, first time I'm doing lipsync in animation! Advice and comments are very welcome!
I hope you'll enjoy it!
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Ben Zingo
the eye & eyebrow movement is very expressive, and the body movement overall looks good. The lipsync seems off though, both not matching the audio, but also not forming the words clearly in the mouth shapes.
Right before frame 30, her hands drops pretty fast and stops awkwardly.
Around 94 her hand movement in the corner seems pretty jerky.
Around 180 her body turn and arm movement seems a bit jerky.
Kyra Simone
Very respectable scene! Some areas the timing is a little wonky, like after 'neurotoxicity'. I'd push that shock more.
Devon Diaz
Love the story you set the characters in. Theres a lot of nice flow with the characters animation movement, but lip syncing could be improved upon. Nice work!
Deleted User
Missed a few words for the lip sync
Jordana Haggard
Really nice story and staging! The speaking character has some great facial expressions that give a clear personality. I think tightening up the lip sync to match the audio better would really bring your animation together and make it feel more polished. Great job!