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bye bye frog
by victor sum
Don't touch the poison frog with your bare skin.
All 3D assets are done by me
Comments
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Vee
The lip sync is a little loose but I love your style!
Chloe Hatler
Love the story here!
Aaron James Mongcopa
Funny!
Johanssen Gan
Camera work, story, and lipsync are great!~
I feel that the way her body bounces into itself feels a bit weird.
Still overall great work, keep animatin!~
Darren Evander
the body language is wrong.especially at the part where she say skin.she points it to nowhere.you should have point the finger to the frog.
and when she says full body,she instead shot at her shoe.Which doesnt make sense according to the line.
One positive thing i can say is i like the ending.
Next time,you should make video referance and try out different acting and body language.keep trying.
Richard Adams
Didn't like her kicking the frog, not okay. Rest of it is extremely well done though. Lip sync could use improvement, but body mechanics extremely nicely done. So is the staging, camera use, and rendering.
Kyra Simone
Very dynamic scene! More distortion of the puppet and less bouncing the entire model can help it feel more natural.
Tyvan Deming
Hilarious! I noticed the setup but wasn't expecting that punch-line, lmao.
Deleted User
I am a little bit confused on the camera movements