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The Bio Lecturer

by Oon Ming Chin

Final Rating: 4.21. Finished #99 out of 149 entries.

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Animator

Oon Ming Chin

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

11days

Description

This animation is one of my assignments and also my fisrt time to take part in the competition . I'm so glad that I have a chance to do this work with my lecturer, Alvin. Thanks to my lecturer

Comments

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Ben Zingo

there's a few nice bits of movement, but the hand holding the wand feels very unnatural, the lipsync is too subtle/lacking, and she never blinks. It's also a bit hard to tell where she's supposed to be looking, or what the scene is

Catherine Lachepelle

Fun animation, but her right hand is a bit distracting: it has too much movement and the pinky feels a little overextended. But great start!

Darren Evander

voice doesnt fit animation and the hand keep doing the same poses,hands are known to be very expressive ,so try to experiment the movement of the hand poses.

Margot Menendez

The eye tracking is off, especially in the latter part of the animation, and her right pinky looks broken. Maybe show a bit more of the scene, and play around more with changes in expression! Don't forget to turn off your HUD, too.