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by Gerald
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Kyra Simone
Nice shape consistency. I see a lot of moments in this one where you can dip down more, and add more anticipation to amplify the curiosity of the character, like at 41 and 192.
Darren Evander
would like more body language with her face.her face doesnt express a lot.
Miles Every
The staging in this is really well done. However there isn't much emotion in the character or action so there's isn't much to say. I will say that the subtle head movements and where the character is looking is easily discernible even without pupils so good job there





