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Like an adventurer!
by Soonjae Kwon
She has a dream that's the world best adventurer.
It's her beginning stage!
Comments
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Ben Zingo
Really nice movement in the girl, though the other two (frog and dog) seem only to be in the block-in stage. Her movement/acting also seems to be a very literal representation/portrayal of what she's saying. Having more interaction with the dog, or a less literal acting out of her words would help.
Edwin Rodriguez
Story works perfectly to the dialogue. Her expression as she pulls the dog looks a little off.
Kyra Simone
Great poses!! Some areas seem a little bit floaty... 226 being the big example where the hat doesn't come down as hard as maybe just I feel it should. I think more settle frames would help throughout.