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Be alarmed!
by Deniz
She panic while introducing a golden poison frog.
Comments
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Tim Collins
The poses are awesome, but the timing (especially towards the end) feels jerky. The frog also dips around frame 135ish.
Juan Solano
Beautifully lit scene i love the ambient. I also really like most of the poses but I do feel like some of them switch to fast in between each other.
Jennie
like the lighting
Vee
This made me smile
Edwin Rodriguez
Nice dramatic poses and angles. The timing is varied and fun. The last line when she says good bye doesn't make sense in the context. Great work!
Catherine Lachepelle
Poses are suuuuper nice and appealing, but the transitions need a little more work. Maybe adding some overshoots?
Ben Zingo
the movement is extremely jittery, and pose-to-pose. If you were trying to get a cartoony zippy/exaggerated effect, focus on the easing, as well as creating arcing movement and/or smears. Exaggerated fast movement is not just zipping from one frame to another, you have to focus on the easing
Darren Evander
the first key pose it weird.no human stand like that.its robbed the believebilaty of the movement.try to fix the hand movement,it move way too much and it distarct the audience from the primary movement which is the body.and the shot confused the audience.try to find shots that can flow well from one part to the other.
Kyra Simone
LOVELY poses. This is the opposite problem of the one I see usually... and that's that you don't give them enough time to switch between each-other. Zip! Bang! And we're over here now! I have no time to anticipate! Please give me some!
muhammet durmuş
very good job. you're so talented. I hope you will be 1st!