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Learning the hard way
by sero
Just practicing a little
Hope you're all well!
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Jennie
270 - good eye twitch.
Vee
I like the ending, you’re lip sync can be a little tighter, but good job!
Anastasia Ackerson
Funny concept! It definitely would be well done if finished but overall i think what you have is pretty nice!
Kyra Simone
Nice poses, but I notice all the body parts move individually and the other ones have to wait their turn. To fix this, make sure the whole body moves in a similar arc in the extreme drawing phase.
Richard Adams
Beautifully drawn, great character designs. Just too few frames per second, like an animatic rather than a finished animation. Animation lacks polish.
Darren Evander
animation too clunky and spacing is wrong,sometimes the action is too fast and too slow.learn the basics before doing acting choices.