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School's Out
It's Amanda's first time teaching kindergarten and as she introduces the class to the new class pet she is met by a very shocking discovery.
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Catherine Lachepelle
The idea is great and a lot of poses are nice. However, the two characters are competing for attention too much in the first shot. One should be toned down, or the camera should be elsewhere to help guide the eye of the viewer. But a great start, with lots of potential!
Kyra Simone
A little too many emotions on that little girl. This is a strange one, but I think more focus on the adult character at the beginning would help, I thought the girl was talking at first watch just because she was framed in the front, higher contrast, and matched the voice better.