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So we tried to make a potion
by Lia Celiz
Verglas does his best but his assistant Pumpkin is a nuisance.
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Jennie
Am I the only one who wanted it to explode at the end?
Anastasia Ackerson
Perhaps more lip syncing, and slightly improved timing would help- it's good, but there's some issues here and there
Kyra Simone
Well, these two look like they get along! Make sure to move the whole body together with poses. Some of them get a bit disjointed.
Justin Huffaker
Very solid story and great drawings! Good overlap and follow through with the fabric and hair. I would mainly work on the lip sync, there seems to be a limited amount of different mouth shapes to represent different syllables, it just kind of opens and closes,. Nice work overall!
Deleted User
Lip Sync seemed a bit lazy