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Deadly Mistake
by Chirag Paul
Student makes a mistake not listening to the teacher first.
Comments
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Jennie
nice gentle walk cycle
Angelica White
I love how you've implemented this with two speaking characters, the story comes across great, love the expressions. I do wish the second character's collapse was timed with the thud in the sound clip.
Darren Evander
a bit floaty.
Kyra Simone
More bounce at the end of actions, please! Especially that last one. And as for the point at 138, love the energy, but a SNAP at the end, where it just stops and buckles back like a TV antenna like boyoyoing... that's what would work better.
Margot Menendez
Your scene could use more color in the background and Mery's skin (unless she's a vampire, in which case you're good there)