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Caution with the poison frog
The girl in the bed has been poisoned by a golden poison frog.
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Ben Zingo
the movements all seem very stiff and pose-to-pose. Revisit your fundamentals and focus on anticipation and overshoot, as well as focusing on creating specific moments of emphasis through the acting
Darren Evander
the last scene doesnt make sense,why does she say bye deadly frog???
Kyra Simone
Good framing. Try to add more secondary action on the arms and work those clavicle and spine joints.
Devon Diaz
I think you do a really good job at setting up the shot with the camera movements and cuts but I think the plot of the scene lacked a little bit of explanation as to what happened in the animation. Nice Work!