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have a nice day
by Tunyakarn
a girl studies her little new deadly friend.
I am a student and really appreciate for feedbacks
thank you :)
Comments
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Utkan Özgür Şahin
Smooth! But found some problems on story design.
Edwin Rodriguez
Really awesome animation, near perfect, I would say the ending doesn't really make sense. The animation is amazing though
Ben Zingo
the movements all feel fluid and natural, but the acting seems a little disjointed and lacks much expression or emphasis. The lipsync also seems off, hard to tell if just the audio delayed, or if the mouth isn't making all the right shapes when it needs to
Cristian
The character moves a bit too frequently with too much jiggle, but other than that the movements, the stylization, and the set design are all great. Nice work.
Kyra Simone
Smooth like butter!!!