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Don't touch the frog, Tiffany!
Tiffany and Daniel look at animals with Abeera! I didn't get a chance to do more than the rough animation but here it is!
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Anastasia Ackerson
Love the concept! If it were finished, it'd make a wonderful piece
Kyra Simone
Such lovely and expressive characters! But these scenes are a little too quick and the focus is all over the place. When you're analyzing the clip, think of what the audience should be focusing on based on the direction... in this clip, it's split between our 'Dora', and our frog. Since both can be on-screen at once, one or two shots is plenty.
JJOneechan
I love the character designs and the flow of what you have right now! I wish to see a more polished version!