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Claudia's Advice

by Chris Leykam

Final Rating: 4.72. Finished #71 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

Chris Leykam

Experience

about 5 months

Time Taken

all month

Description

This was my first undertaking of a paper frame-by-frame piece. I am learning the traditional way to really get a feel for how objects move page to page and how to break down each movement.

Comments

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Ben Zingo

the drawings and lines look nice, but the head has a strange kind of disconnect from the body. Maybe try just drawing the head as a circle with the body for starters, and then add all the lipsync and details after?

Juan

Wow so smooth!

Athallah satya

i feeel like if your this good you it should be illegal to enter cuz like this is unfair bruh its TOO GOOD

Kara Himes

Smooth movement and nice overlapping action with the hair. However, there's not a ton of variety in the composition or facial expressions.