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New Technology

by MFuller

Final Rating: 4.04. Finished #109 out of 195 entries.

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Animator

MFuller

Experience

1 Year

Time Taken

60 hours

Description

Cant get phone to work

Comments

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Ben Zingo

try mixing things up, twist the hips, the shoulders, think about possibly incorporating the scene into your acting decisions so that your character isn't just standing up straight, making subtle gestures with their hands

Alyssa P

I'd watch the mouth shapes as some syllables don't match correctly. The eyes are also a bit wild sometimes. But the character has really good, believable weight and movements! I would just try to incorporate more of a story next time!

Yasmin

I like the expressiveness in your character's face. I get the sense of exasperation based on the way the eyes and mouth move. However, I think it might be helpful to add more motion to the body, because the rest of the character feels very stiff.