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Stuck
Venessa just moved into her new house when some boxes fell on her. She is now trapped and must call her friend for help.
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Ben Zingo
Took me a minute to figure out she was pinned in place, and the angle of the hand holding the phone feels awkward. Some of the lipsync could also use a bit of work "on a land line" bit in particular feels like maybe it's over-animated
Alyssa P
The mouth and lips get super wild/jerky at times, where its saying more syllables than the audio says or making weird shapes that don't correlate. However, a lot of the times it's also spot on!
david
lip sync in "on a a land line" doesn't match for me.
Div
Is it that something fell on the lady ? If so, it could have been a little more elaborated so as to make the context of the scene more clear.
Jaikub Montero
The subtle movement seems good, but visual appeal lacks due to single shot and pose.