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Social Contract
by Melissa
I discovered the competition from a teacher in the college, so i've decided to try it, and this is the result.
Enjoy it! :D
Comments
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Ben Zingo
there's a lot of "popping" in the joints, making the movement feel very jerky
Mathew Payton
Nice job! I like the facial expressions you gave the standing character, it seems like they're really feeling the emotions of the dialogue. In some spots though it seems like they move a bit too quickly. As an example, their right hand seems to snap around frame 34. So I think making sure everything is in spline mode and that there's no keyframes too close together could help. And I think moving their torso a bit from frame 200 to 280 could give more life to the character. Good job!
Grace Weng
I love the bounciness of the hair when the brush interacts with it, what a lovely detail! The movements feel a bit mechanical, but the posing is pretty strong. If you wanted to take the time to smooth things out a little more, I think this would be a very satisfying piece to watch.