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what is love

by cho_hanjin

Final Rating: 5.83. Finished #33 out of 243 entries.

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Animator

cho_hanjin

Experience

8month

Time Taken

3weeks

Description

A man explaining that real love is helping someone you love

Comments

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Alexander Dvorak

The animation is well done, but I don't think the movements themselves are believable. People don't move their limbs that much when gesturing. Even still, you did a great job at performing those movements and they feel very fluid. Good job!

Joshua

Just need to avoid 'Twinning' the characters arms, and get the angles of the hands a bit better.

Seth Lawrence

I really think you've done a great job with timing and spacing, as well as applying squash and stretch throughout this animation. One suggestion that i have is to not twin (duplicate the movement or animation) with Malcolm's arms. There's only one time that each arm is acting on it's own while the other is out of frame. I belive that avoiding twinning would improve your animation overall.

Nils Kuhl

awesome animation but be careful of too many parallels in movements (hands going out and in exactly the same way almost all the time) ;) gj otherwise

Connor Brown

Awesome work! My only thought is to vary the timing of the body movements a bit more. Really well done stuff!

Hailey D'Angelo

I think you showcased this character so well. I can tell you used references to understand the movements. I liked the timing and the lip sync lined up really well. There's a ton of personality that looks great and I think you did a good job.

Ben Zingo

Overall nice, but it feels veeery pose-to-pose-to-pose. Maybe offset some of the timing, or make sure there's a mix of slow movements, and quick movements, to avoid it feeling repetitive or robotic in the timing. Your use of anticipation and overshoot are nice!

DongHun Kim

wonderfull