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Owning Your Mistake
by Ameer
Sometimes just owning your mistake is really hard. It can feel really heavy to accept the responsibility in a situation that doesn’t always portray us at our best.
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Ben Zingo
it's nice, but actions feel very floaty. Think about tweaking the ramping/easing, holding on certain poses, etc
Rhys Davey
Girl keys are sliding like crazy. Try a more pose to pose approach and dial way back on how much she moves. Just go for expression changes mostly.
Good base for the man.
Listen to the audio again and mark out the points of emphasis.
Then apply some accentuation particularly in the face.
Feet look like they are nailed to the floor. He could take some small steps around her like he was trying to connect with her despite her turning her back.