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The show
The man talk show on stage.
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Joshua
You need to not have the mouth pucker in the 'o' shape so much.
Langa
Wow, this is great. Love how you overlap the actions to give a squash and stretch effect throughout the entire body. Love that you hold the poses as well. This should place very highly.
Cassandra Garzia
Nice job imitating the breathing! The slow blinks and upward glance tell a lot about the character. It is not entirely clear why Ray isn't real, but the animation is very clean.
Rhys Davey
Nice. Could do with an expression change or two. Adding subtle squints could help with emotional beats.
Ben Zingo
Nice! I like some of the timing and offsetting that you did, but seems like some things could be pushed further (leaning in further, exaggerating certain face shapes for emphasis, etc.) Next time maybe try adding slight eye dart movements- even if subtle, it just adds an extra layer of realism!