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monologue WIP
I'm still working on this shot at the moment, but anyway I decided to send it here. All the main ideas are already there. Will need to add more inbetweens, keep the pauses alive and so on.
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Gabriel Magalhaes
oohh man! so awesome, but you should have finished the animation
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Joshua
Very good, some points docked for it being incomplete, but very well done none the less.
Rogier Henkelman
It's not finished so I can't give it too high a grade, but wow the parts that are finished are very good! Great sense of timing, depth and weight
Desiree Cedillo Orozco
great acting, would've loved to see it finished!
Michelle
Love the body movement
Timmy Kwee
love the animation , the weight and the secondary action.
Richard Adams
Top 5 entry, possible winner. Disney quality animation.11 stars.
This is SOOO good! I am in awe!
kosar momeni
Character creation is excellent! But Lip syncing needs improvement, and I would like it if it reveals the second person as well.
Jennifer Jacobsen
Love the drawing, love the gestures!
Ben Zingo
solid drawings!
Nils Kuhl
Love the acting





