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I am getting late
by Ayon Bera
Description
A man is shocked by his wife when he is waiting for his breakfast before leaving for office......
Comments
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Christopher Reig
This piece is handled fairly well for having two characters constantly in the shot. I would recommend to work on the moving holds a bit more, currently the characters stop moving too much when they are not talking and it makes them feel a bit stiff. I would also recommend to push the emotions a bit more at the end for the woman character, currently the delivery is very flat when the audio is a bit more emotional.
fang ze ran
Is it not finished? Feel Like a boss! !