« Back to November 2023 Competition
A little Distraction
by karen
I have a year of experience animating.
It took me a month to animate it.
I don't have much experience, but I made a great effort to participate.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Brittany Dugan
The concept is fun! You were able to establish jaw movement as well as object interaction and camera movement. To strength this piece, for the main character, have her eyes have a target of some sort. For dialogue, after posing the jaw, focus on the shape of the mouth for each sound coming out. Also for the camera, the perspective can be used for storytelling. The last camera position makes it appear as if the bug is on a very high shelves and puts him in a power position instead of more of a supporting role. Changing it to show scale as well as position will help a lot.