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Ms McMuffins
by Fiona Ho
Trying my hands on more facial expressions, would love to hear your feedbacks! :)
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Angela Di Pasquo
Overall this animation looks very professional! The acting choices were really great, with the prop interactions with the bowl mixing, to pushing it aside and throwing herself forward. The only note I would make on improving this is when she has the spoon at the end, she doesn't really do anything with it except hold it. You could instead maybe have it wave it around as she says her final line, or maybe throw it back in the discarded bowl in frustration. I also thought the stirring action in the beginning looked a little fake like the bowl was empty -- perhaps if you recorded reference for this you would want to use a bowl that does have something in it for better simulation.
Richard Adams
Possible winner! SO well done!
Nathaniel Ales
Nice overlapping action!
Claudia Vieira
Really good !
Janco
This is great!