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Magic Beginner
Description
Her magic is so powerful that it is difficult to control it delicately.
Comments
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Radhe McCreedy
Creative take on this audio! Great work with the overall actions and facial expressions. I think having the fairy character come in at more of an angle, leading with her upper body more would make this stronger. Making her flight path an arc instead of a straight line would make it more appealing as well. Overall nicely done!