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Ruined Anniversary Dessert
by Terrance
Description
Raymond's Girlfriend failed to bake muffins for their 1 year Anniversary
Comments
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Kaithlyn Villarreal
Your film has a great use of lighting and setting! I think the characters are also very expressive, both in their actions and reactions. I would suggest to limit the cuts back and forth from each character as it gets a bit hard to see what is happening and is abrupt. Great work!