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Brun muffins house
by Mu Cheok Yan
Description
This animation is I try my best to do. Hope you enjoy.
Comments
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Chloe Douzable
I love how outside of the box this story is! Because of this, I think the beginning shot doesn't need to be as long. I think it's still clear what the story is with a shorter clip. I also think you should spend more time polishing those key poses and the transitions between them.