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Perfectionism VS. Muffins

by Maria Ferreira

Final Rating: 5.57. Finished #66 out of 330 entries.

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Animator

Maria Ferreira

Experience

Not a lot, I started studying animation properly last year

Time Taken

I'd say roughly 8 hours for everything

Description

pov you lose it because you just failed at the one thing you're good at (muffins)

Comments

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Cassidy Crum

I very much like the variety in character designs and the use of pupil size to help tell the character emotions. My one main suggestion would be to try and keep the line thickness consistent between shots. When zoomed in the characters, the line art is much thicker for them since we are zoomed in. However, this jump in thickness between shots can be a bit distracting when it is rapidly switching between thin and thick for the same character.

Aaron James Mongcopa

Better not join next time if you're going to submit garbage. You're just wasting out time. thanks.

xu fei

nice storyboard