Muffins

Destiny Nieves

You did a great job developing the environment in your animation. I also think the emotions expressed in your animation are strong. I recommend adding more fluid motion to the arms of both characters. I also recommend placing the second character closer to the middle of the composition since they are the subject of interest in that scene. Since the kitchen shot has a lot of detail in the staging I think it would be nice to see some background detail in the shot with the second character. Overall, well done!

Joana Rodrigues

some parts are cracking - the animation isn't fluid. the lip sync need improvement. study staging, the characters are pulled to far to the right