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Burnt Muffins
by GroveyArt
not too sure because i'm still a student and i guess i started learning about a year ago
roughly 3 to 4 days
girl burns muffins.
end of description.
Comments
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Sofia Delgado
Timing with the man walking in is a bit off but the expressions are well done.
Destiny Nieves
You did a great job expressing emotion through the characters. The second character's reaction to the muffins was funny. Unfortunately I missed his reaction the first time I watched it because I was focused on the first character. I recommend including camera shots that switch between the characters when they are reacting so that the audience sees the important moments of the animation. Overall I think the animation just needs a bit more polish. Great work so far!