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The Apple
by Toby Feakin
Malcolm v Malcolm - who will win?
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Richard Clark
Posing could be better. Did you shoot reference for this? Your characters don't have much weight to them. It's not really natural for the left character to grab the apple with his right hand. The body is twisting in an unnatural way. If you shot reference, you would see that naturally you would snatch it with the hand closest to it. You also do the exact thing with the other character when he tries to grab it back.
Nico Bisceglia
Hey there! Wonderful job on this animation! You have great composition and understanding of motion. Your prop and character interactions have good timing too. By adding more animation to the "mask" of the face and hands/fingers, I believe this could push your animation further. Your lip-syncing is well done, so providing more animation in the eyes and brows can really bring forth more emotion.
David S. Rodriguez
Awesome animation!