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First Day
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First day on the job for a young correctional officer.
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Genndy
Your work is fantastic. Great animation and an awesome execution of the idea!
Ira Zagrivaya
The art and the execution are all on point. Great job!
Richard Clark
Really nice! I like the character designs and the staging! I would try to add some slight squash and stretch to their walkcycles to give it some more life to it. I would also like to see a slight reaction to the bump on the older character... meaning his arm being bumped should have a reaction to it. The last part, "Don't touch me" is really good!!
David S. Rodriguez
Definitely a professional piece and worth remembering!





