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Richard Clark

I think you should retime the slim character's movement over to the other side when he starts to say "Oh, give it the old college try". The reason is when a character is talking, you run the risk of another character distracting with his movement. Also, I think you need to improve on your walk cycles. Even though we can't see the entire walk, it's important to flesh that out in perspective because the trained eye will notice it being incorrect. What's going on with the blue shirt guy's right arm at around frame 228? It appears to be hyperextending.

David S. Rodriguez

Good, but I think the expression of the more gangster dude should be scowling instead of smiling. Still, the animation is good.