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The Argument (11_sec_animation)
by Sarath Raju
just two old friends arguing about things
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Nick Haymond
The camera should stop moving around frame 73- continuing the motion feels distracting.
Richard Clark
It's a bit jarring seeing the camera movement when you can't see anything in the background to ground the movement, so it looks like the characters are moving strangely. I'm guessing you didn't shoot reference for this?... It shows. Both characters pretty much stay in the same pose aside from some of the hand gestures. Next time try to research an idea, shoot reference for it, create a simple set for it and study your movement on camera before animating.
David S. Rodriguez
The gold character should not extend his arm and pointing throughout the whole scene, especially after frame 212. Different poses are needed but the camera movement is decent.