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no eating
by max
I hope this was better, I tried to get some better cuts.
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Richard Clark
The camera movement is too crazy. You don't need that in there. Just cut back and forth instead. Actually, I would recommend starting at the beginning with the simple bouncing ball exercise before competing.
Lorne H.
Nice job conveying the scene. I would recommend making separate cuts between the camera changes because the movement is sporadic and makes it harder to follow the dialogue.
David S. Rodriguez
Not ready for the competition because of the visible resolution gate and the camera doing most of the movement and it is a bit jarring. Also, the fox's eyes should follow the falling barbarian after slapping him to the ground. Neither character is expressing nor moving much.