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The boot and the pro
Animator
Experience
1 year of school 2 years of personal projects
Time Taken
2 and a half weeks
Description
cop first day on the job with his training officer
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ronda crom
5 stars
Richard Clark
I like how the left character throws away his (juice box?) ...nice! I'd say the biggest issue you have in your piece is the lack of weight in the walk cycles. You're simply moving the characters up and down but not adding any secondary motion to it. Example: Maybe have the shoulders come down a little after the body reaches its lowest point to give a bit of secondary. The head could also add some secondary motion to the walks.
David S. Rodriguez
Perfect! The timing, the distance, and the back-and-forth!