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Been studying animation for little over a year
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Seth screams at Sol about not eing paid to eat
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Veronica Yap
You handled that transition between sitting and walking well! And I like the each character's head movements a lot.
Richard Clark
I like the idea that the 2 characters get up at "got any questions". That gives it a nice change of pace! Good job with that! At the beginning when the right character comes up to the table, his right hand on the desk continues to catch my eye. The pose stays in a "fist" position which looks strange to me. Some of the posing on the right character walk could improve, like the arms seem too close to the body and the position of the wrist when the arm is forward seems in a weird angle. Overall, you've got some nice stuff in there.
Sam Hughes
Keyframes and actions are solid! Maybe close the mouth for some of those consonants at the end ("Don't touch me!") as the mouth looks slightly airy when left to transition between an 'open' to an 'open', if that makes sense?
David S. Rodriguez
Great work! The animation is on-point, and everything flows organically. There is enough contrast between the background and characters by using two values and a bright blue outline for the background. Stellar job!