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An adventurer’s bounty
by Abbie
Fantasy based
Two adventurers in a tavern, one a newbie and the other a veteran. Audience is observing from the veteran’s point of view as he sternly tells the newbie about how the bounty job works.
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Richard Clark
Interesting setup... I'm a bit confused as to what the story is and what is going on here. The way the character is moving his hands and arms, is he a magician or something? And why the 1 million? Is this a reward for something? It's not very clear. The push at the end was unexpected. It didn't look like the character touched him at all.
David S. Rodriguez
Everything is too fluid. I recommend adding some rigidity and realistic movements to the arms of the characters. Everything else works and the animation is still good.