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A experienced worker is explaining to a young coworker what he shouldnt do.
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Richard Clark
I don't understand the setup for this one. It might be good to make that clearer. What is that on the screen left character's back? Around 144, his hands look like feet. I would fix that. And you don't need the tear at the end. It's way too early for that type of reaction. The "don't touch me" needs a moment to register before a reaction.
David S. Rodriguez
The quality is not high, but it works. Adding more dynamic digits to the hands and a more developed lip sync would be massive improvements.