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Failed Security
by Eric Skeans
I've taken a few classes at Animschool
around 20-25 hours
A man is upset over the results of the security around a vault, and berates his security team.
Comments
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Drake Bell
I like the story that you have here and your performance is good but I feel like we need to see just a bit more. Who is he talking to? Why is he nothing? Maybe have the vault door open and only a few loose dollar bills on the floor or change up the camera angle to be like a CCTV footage and that he just locked himself in the vault. Staging goes a long way and I feel that with just a few slight tweaks to your story, your animation as a whole would be elevated to the next level.
Kiawa Dempsey
Hi! Your animation is very clean! I can tell you focused on polishing it based off the arcs and blinking. Something I noted however, was that a lot of his movements were very stereotypical. He does a point gesture for you and a swiping gesture for nothing for example. It would have been awesome to see some more unique movements with a more in-depth story. Perhaps having him move around the space a bit more or showing us the character he is talking to. Good job!