Practice on camera

Name: Practice on camera
Duration: 11 s
Channel: Michael Hyun
Description: First time entering this competition, my teacher recommended this for my final animation for class Animation is about a man acting on camera and accidentally shooting his lights out

by Michael Hyun

Final Rating: 4.62. Finished #85 out of 130 entries.

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Animator

Michael Hyun

Experience

~3 years of college education

Time Taken

3 days ~18 hours

Description

First time entering this competition, my teacher recommended this for my final animation for class
Animation is about a man acting on camera and accidentally shooting his lights out

Comments

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Ekaterine Begashvili

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Quinn Gardner

I really love the premise and ending here, very unique! I think for such a cartoonish character, you should include much more squash and stretch and anticipation. Giving your character very deformed expressions that squish between emotions would really help to sell what your character is currently feeling. Right now, especially in the beginning, it can be a bit difficult to discern the expression your character is giving off due to this deficit in exaggerated emotion. Continuing with the idea of exaggeration, using this alongside anticipation would really help make every motion much more animated and expressive. Overall, I think what you have here is really cool and could just use a bit more detail to really turn this into a superb animation!