Not the car

Dieguito Pritchett

ok, the keys definitely match the sound... but I don't know if it goes well with the story

Christian Greyeyes

- No idea what's going on
- The animated lips lag behind audio (though only a little)
- No sense of body gestures in the video
- little range of expression in face

- Conveyed some sense of emotion in face
- Some basic structure to bodies

Dan Paris

This needs a lot of work. There is no action in the character, its just lips moving. The foot step and keys can be removed, not necessary to bring to life what you want to show. The drawings are good and clean, but be more creative next time.

Damián Navarro Méndez

he is just like a sculpture moving his mouth, and if you put him inside a car, then show him before entering that car or in the car already, not with a blank background