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Don't Eat Car

by Luis Gea

Final Rating: 2.86. Finished #124 out of 144 entries.

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Animator

Luis Gea

Experience

not much

Time Taken

5 hours

Description

baby is eating the car

Comments

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Jimmy Horner

The arms are very similar in their movement and the character could use some stronger expressions.

Eva Elmo Leung

Lip syncing could be better.

Jon Sheldon

The phonemes need to be clearer. Also, the body seems very rigid.

Damián Navarro Méndez

not bad, but the lip sync is not well timed, and in frame 170 when he turns his hands they look like roboting hands being turned by a control, no a smooth turnover. Keep on going