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Not that car !

by Vincent Detourbe

Final Rating: 3.86. Finished #91 out of 144 entries.

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Animator

Vincent Detourbe

Experience

I've just finished my studies in animation

Time Taken

1 month

Description

A monster is eating the car of a man...

Comments

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Robert

Why so strange? Stranger doesn't mean better.

Anurag Sahu

nice act but its looking flat ....it can be much better :)

Owen

Like the exaggerated postures. Would like to see the situation he is yelling at for greater context and emotional import.

Danny Kneip

The best way to avoid animating a lip sync is by covering or hiding the face - which you've done with ease here. Unfortunately, it's not much of an animation.

Damián Navarro Méndez

without mouth and facial expression you won't improve. Also the walk is wrong... don't be afraid of animating mouths