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NO No NO No ..... !!!
by Satish Kumar
This is my second time.
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Sebastián Fracini
Love that 2D effect!
Dieguito Pritchett
Amazing performance and I'm a sucker for toon shader, so I love it... But i feel bad for the dog since he was never eating the car, maybe you could've had him nibble on the tire rather that peeing
Anurag Sahu
loved it
K Thomas Fosse
I like the perspective and the foreshortening of the character. Like the style as well..
[user]
Nice animation bud!
Tobias Egeli
good animation all over, but this is a competition so i would recomend coming up with a better idee that is more orignal and tell another story.
I really liked the ending when hi leans to the car. he seems to be very exhausted, good acting.
Sajjad Afzal
Wonderful work.
Danny Kneip
Nicely rendered and animated. The lip sync is solid and the dog, even from behind, is adorable. Lots of great choices here - something to be proud of!
Davit Martirosyan
Very good! Top 5 i think
Amartya Mukherji
nice fluid motion. Top 5 probably. The toon shading look is also cool.
The dog was not eating the car. He was peeing there.
The boxes landed far left off where those should have landed. Its slightly disturbing.
At some poses Malcom body looked too static. probably that was your animation style.
Owen
Need some more dramatic shift of movement at the start when he notices (the dog peeing?) like dropping the boxes or something. Maybe doesn't fully import his concern when he keeps carrying them. Zoom in cut at the end really works. Nice.
Alexandre Spontak
Great !